My 10 year old daughter wrote this at school for a poem competition. I would like to share it with you all.
This will be in the match day programme tomorrow!
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Hibernian
Eleven bonnie lads stood there in green,
Full of determination to beat the other team.
Wi Sparky up front this shid be easy,
But aw the fans are still feeling queasy.
When we play the jam-tarts they shid be feart,
Cause at the end of the match they’ll aw be in tears.
7-0, the greatest score in an Edinburugh derby,
Aye fir the Jambo’s that day went agley.
Pat Fenlons green and white army,
Oh the Hibee’s are offy barmy.
Thur always bouncing in section 43,
Singing at the top of their lungs Sunshine on Leith.
Winning a game is never a hassle,
Fir them wearing the harp, ship and castle.
Other teams that say their the best, och! Their just havering,
There never wis a better team than the great Hibernian.
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30-01-2013 07:12 PM #1First Team Regular
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My daughter's poem
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30-01-2013 07:15 PM #3@hibs.net private member
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That's brilliant!
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30-01-2013 07:16 PM #4
Originally Posted by Pat McGinlay
This quote is hidden because you are ignoring this member. Show QuoteMy 10 year old daughter wrote this at school for a poem competition. I would like to share it with you all.
Hibs poem.jpg
Hibernian
Eleven bonnie lads stood there in green,
Full of determination to beat the other team.
Wi Sparky up front this shid be easy,
But aw the fans are still feeling queasy.
When we play the jam-tarts they shid be feart,
Cause at the end of the match they’ll aw be in tears.
7-0, the greatest score in an Edinburugh derby,
Aye fir the Jambo’s that day went agley.
Pat Fenlons green and white army,
Oh the Hibee’s are offy barmy.
Thur always bouncing in section 43,
Singing at the top of their lungs Sunshine on Leith.
Winning a game is never a hassle,
Fir them wearing the harp, ship and castle.
Other teams that say their the best, och! Their just havering,
There never wis a better team than the great Hibernian.
Your daughter has much better handwriting than me.
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30-01-2013 07:16 PM #5Left by mutual consent!
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That's the winner right there.
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30-01-2013 07:32 PM #9Promising Youngster
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awwww gave me goosebumps - little sweetheart!!!
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30-01-2013 07:36 PM #10First Team Breakthrough
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Makes me cringe at how bad my poems were at 10 years old compared to that!
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Amazing! Should send this to the club.
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30-01-2013 08:02 PM #13First Team Regular
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Originally Posted by blaikie
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I think her mum is!
ill let u know how we get on
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Brilliant
ggtth
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30-01-2013 09:13 PM #15Coaching Staff
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Get that on the website Hibs!
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Delightful wee cousin
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Brilliant! Think she could be hired as the Sect43 song composer.
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Magnificent, get it sung on match day!
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30-01-2013 09:41 PM #19First Team Regular
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Thank you big cousin Originally Posted by HibeeMcGinn1
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31-01-2013 12:39 PM #20First Team Regular
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Thanks for all the great comments :-)
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That's superb
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That's brilliant ,,,my partner and I flew in or game,,staying in Nairn for a few days feeling depression...but this has made me realise there is life after disappointment,,thank your daughter from us,,,, Originally Posted by Pat McGinlay
This quote is hidden because you are ignoring this member. Show QuoteThis might cheer you up tonight. My 10 year old daughter wrote this at school for a poem competition. I would like to share it with you all.
Hibs poem.jpg
Hibernian
Eleven bonnie lads stood there in green,
Full of determination to beat the other team.
Wi Sparky up front this shid be easy,
But aw the fans are still feeling queasy.
When we play the jam-tarts they shid be feart,
Cause at the end of the match they’ll aw be in tears.
7-0, the greatest score in an Edinburugh derby,
Aye fir the Jambo’s that day went agley.
Pat Fenlons green and white army,
Oh the Hibee’s are offy barmy.
Thur always bouncing in section 43,
Singing at the top of their lungs Sunshine on Leith.
Winning a game is never a hassle,
Fir them wearing the harp, ship and castle.
Other teams that say their the best, och! Their just havering,
There never wis a better team than the great Hibernian.
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01-02-2013 07:27 AM #23Private Members Prediction League Winner
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10 year old? Very impressive mate
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01-02-2013 07:56 AM #24First Team Breakthrough
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That is a first class poem from a wee star
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01-02-2013 12:43 PM #25@hibs.net private member
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Get it on a Poster man ! Put it up on the wall with pride :)
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Top class Maz!
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01-02-2013 02:02 PM #27Coaching Staff
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My old man. A Jambo God love him used to tell me a Hibs poem from the 50s. Amy old timers know this complete?
Easter Road's the place to go if you want to see a team.
It ain't half value for your dough and the fitba it's a dream.
The goalie and the backs are grand the halfbacks always shine.
We've got the best in aw the land in oor wee forward line.
No idea on the rest and ends with....and Smith the gay tormentor.
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That is a FANtastic poem, especially for a 10 year old.
Congratulations and I hope there is a cream or egg or seven for her efforts
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Originally Posted by hibee92
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Thanks Ace
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brilliant!!!
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